GiantJuly19 – 1st Draft Complete

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The first draft of my entry for the GiantJuly19 flash fiction contest is complete. This time I deliberately left the pages unnumbered so I would be (relatively) less mindful of my length. Came in at 2435 words. That’s more than trimming an unnecessary word here and there; that’s real meat that has to come out.

I always kept in the back of my head the option to publish a “Director’s Cut” once the contest results have been announced, but now I’m wondering if that doesn’t cheapen the contest entry somehow. The editing should be more-or-less organic, which requires me to care deeply about the 2k-word version. It should be something worthy of the contest evaluators’ time. More people will read the contest version than my precious puffed-up darling, after all.

Anyway, time to get cutting.

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From the Archives – 20190708

Added one page to Original Stories by Olo:

The Interview

A professional woman discovers that the interview process has changed in the years since she last looked for a job.

30 Oct 2015

Seal the Deal

Dude’s getting a blowjob, and he doesn’t know it yet, but he’s getting it from a witch. He’s startled when she stops before he cums, but he’s even more surprised when he opens his eyes and discovers that while she was blowing him, he shrank to the height of three inches.

She tells him that he will return to normal size in four hours, but if he cums before that he will be tiny permanently. Then she licks her lips and smiles.