Added one page to Original Stories by Olo:
Green Day
The Lady of the House chose green today, and her tenants must hold up their end of the bargain. ButtyJuly17 entry. |
29 Aug 2017
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Added one page to Original Stories by Olo:
Green Day
The Lady of the House chose green today, and her tenants must hold up their end of the bargain. ButtyJuly17 entry. |
29 Aug 2017
|
This is a well executed, cute story. The agreement between the lady of the house and the tiny people is very amusing, and I wonder if it’s always about the color of panties or if it involves other interactions. You’ve created a nice world here.
I like their teamwork and the apparent way they welcome newcomers, with warmth, food, clothing, but also with the understanding they have a very important role to play for room and board.
Your story makes me with there were more Butty July contests. I had so much fun with that one! Well done, Olo. I hope there are many more stories from you in future contests, as I enjoy your style and obvious writing skill.
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Thank you! I had a great time trying to come up with new metaphors for everyone’s favorite anatomical region.
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